Imperialism Case

Imperialism is defined as one country's domination of the political, economic, and social life of another country. Imperialism is bad because the country subjected to imperialism is forced to give up their culture and government. The imposing country usually strips the country of valuable resources. It is an act of aggressively expanding one countries doctrine over other countries. Many can lose their freedom. The European imperialist push into Africa was motivated by three main factors labor force (slavery), cultural confusion, and the poor quality of education.

In some parts of Africa, Europeans would turn local Africans into slaves to work on plantations. When the European manufacturing plants were built, the raw materials from Africa were extracted and the company owners developed an indigenous labor force, which was managed by foreigners. Many tribal leaders became corrupt and would sell their own people into slavery to protect themselves. Others would sign treaties without understanding that they were giving up their freedom. (Ok, your examples are good. Now you need to say that yet again, turning Africans into slaves, corrupting them, and cheating them are some of the ways Imperialism negatively impacted Africans). (You need a transition sentence. Don't confuse your reader! Let the reader know that there is a reason you are going to talk about turning Africans into slaves. Why are you bringing this up? You are showing the reader the negative effects of Imperialism. Ok, tell the reader that, then give your examples). In some parts of Africa, Europeans would turn local Africans into slaves to work on plantations. When the European manufacturing plants were built, the raw materials from Africa were extracted and the company owners developed an indigenous labor force, which was managed by foreigners. Many tribal leaders became corrupt and would sell their own people into slavery to protect themselves. Others would sign treaties without understanding that they were giving up their freedom. (Ok, your examples are good. Now you need to say that yet again, turning Africans into slaves, corrupting them, and cheating them are some of the ways Imperialism negatively impacted Africans).

(Need a transition sentence! Why are you talking about what they grew? Why do you have this paragraph? Tell the reader what to expect - give him a road sign so he knows what he should be thinking about next. So, write a sentence that introduces this part of your paper). The Europeans began to build plantations where they grew peanuts, palm oil, cocoa, and rubber. They also took important minerals. The Congo produced copper and tin. South Africa had gold and diamonds. The discovery of gold and diamonds in Africa increased European interest in the continent. (Hold up, are you talking about what the Europeans did in Africa or why they wanted to come to Africa? You have already talked about the reasons behind Imperialism, that's in your first

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